Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Writer's Week (is now over. /sigh)

Monday: I really enjoyed Julie Halpern’s talk. She came across as very personable and was easy to listen to. She made me laugh out loud with her commentary and her stories from her life. I especially liked the story of going over to her high school crush’s house and seeing matzah and thinking, “Oh, I didn’t know he was Jewish.” That struck me as exactly the sort of weirdly irrelevant, inane thought I would have. I found her descriptions of time in the mental hospital so interesting, especially the apparent contradictory-ness there. Another thing she said that I found inspiring was that she didn’t always want to be a writer and she didn’t write full-length novels by age thirteen like a lot of other authors—things that slightly intimidate me--but she kept writing throughout her life, with letters, journals, and zines, because she liked it so much.

Tuesday: I thought Jonathan’s piece about meeting the bird lady was hilarious. I liked the way he structured the story—at times, it seemed a bit stream of consciousness and in the moment and other times he seemed to be reflecting back on how bizarre the whole encounter was. I completely believe that the strangers you meet can be colorful, mad characters that seem straight out of fiction. I also really liked Tamar’s piece—her approach was so honest. I can see the idea written a lot of different, more complicated ways--but sometimes simple is clearly better.

Wednesday: I loved Sierra Demulder! The topics of her poems are gruesome, yes, but they really made me think. My favorites were the one from the perspective of the serial killer’s mother and the one about Matthew Shepherd, but all of her poetry was brilliant.

Thursday: Being a pretty unmusical person myself, I was impressed by all the singers’ talent. However, I wasn’t blown away by most of the lyrics. I guess it’s the cynic coming out of me when I say the majority of love songs I hear are forgettable and have clichéd lyrics? Not to say that I found the lyrics steryotypical—I mean, having heard straight writing read all week, I’d gotten used to really appreciating and paying attention when people were completely original in their ideas and words, which is harder and different when translated to music. I did like Maggie Dever’s second song quite a lot because of her perspective as “the friend” as well as her pretty voice. Hannah Lee was terrific. I liked the guitar especially, and I wish we could’ve seen the rest of her OC routine. She has great stage presence. Like Anna said earlier, to have the bell ring and no one leave takes talent--you have to engage the audience incredibly well, and that she did.

Friday: I don’t know whether I liked Billy Lombardo’s performance. He seemed a bit dazed. Also, I don’t like baseball at all, which is nearly all he talked about. But I suppose I wasn’t having a very good day on Friday, and I was too distracted to pay much attention. I did like his poem about the town he grew up in and almost rediscovering it through showing it to his son.

This was such a lovely week. Writer’s Week is my favorite week in the school year. Everyone has something to say and I think it gives students, especially, such a great platform to do so eloquently and wonderfully...this outright gushing has rendered me incoherent, I apologize. As much as I enjoy the professional talks, I do think the students are the highlight—there were admittedly some not-so-stellar performances but they were outweighed by brilliant ones of people like Iulia G, Dawne Wright (“Just ‘case I use metaphors don’t mean it ain’t literal” made me shiver—so good!), Lizzy and Katherine from our class, and so many more. I was in a ridiculously good mood nearly all week as a result, which doesn't happen very often.

Just In Time!!!

I definitely think that Writer's Week should come back! I miss it already!

MONDAY
So we, the class, got to see Julie Halpern! It was cool. I thought that she had a nice clear voice filled with emotion. I could tell that she knew exactly where she should emphasize on her words. But what distracted my quite a bit was her body movement when she would keep ...wiggling (not quite sure about how to describe it)and twitching. Maybe it was also the swaying. I don't recall. Other than that, sure the fat thing was funny. But she brought it up a little too much for my taste. Overall, i thought she was good because she had funny experiences and shared them with us, the audience, in a funny manner that was entertaining. ALSO I SAW LIZZY JAMNICK!!!!! I CONGRATULATE HER AGAIN!!!!

TUESDAY
So on this day, the student performed. Going in order. Tamar Alexanian had a good story that I enjoyed but, it could be just me, her hair flipping annoyed me. If she wanted her hair out of her face then I think that she should have pinned it up.Nekendra Currie rhymed which I salute her for because it must of been harder in comparison to a free versed poem. Also, even though it was clear that she was nervous, she still tried her best and was able to get her meaning across to me.Colleen Francis had a different type of poem. Her poem was happy and pretty cool even though it was about a hard time that she had to go through. Jonathan Stoller-Schoff was ever all funny and enjoyable. He knew where he had to pause in order to let the "funny" really stand out. Alaina McCaffery had an adoriable experience from my point of view but her hair was a bit distracting as it hung in front of her face. Unser Ahmed...I have absolutely no complaints. I loved his. Oh and I went on this day so I have no complaints.

WEDNESDAY
Sierra DeMulder was amazing. Gosh I kept wondering how old she was! She was very powerful and I like how she didn't present her ideas bluntly but asked us if we knew what she was talking about then gave us information. Very good tone and I really loved her poems and they were very (times 10000000000) good. She is definitely a good entertainer as well as slam poet. She also had a wonderful personality when i talked to her in the Writer's Week room. I hope I get to see and talk to her next year.

THURSDAY
Well I would first like to say....type that i think that it must of been very hard for tech crew so even though they were having technical errors, i think they did a good job.I liked when Hannah Fox had a song that was not only in Spanish but also in English. Though I wish that she had must in the background or some kind of beat.Deena Bishop must of had it hard playing the piano with a problem with her thumb. I had something similar happen to me before like that and it was HARD! Good job overall to Maggie Denver. Daniel Ghadaksaz must have been really nervous to be rapping in front of a lot of people. Even though he was quiet and i couldn't really hear him, he is courageous and his rap was beautiful. Maybe if he made it a MP3 I would download it. Hannah Lee was AMAZING!!! Encore Hannah Lee, ENCORE!!!

FRIDAY
Billy Lombardo... I admit i did get VERY sleepy. He was pretty timid and not very confident overall. But I've heard that his book is good! I think he is one of those people that are good writers but not really good entertainers. But I am sure he has a wonderful amount of words that he will write in the future.

OVERALL
I absolutely love Writer's Week! It is wonderful, amazing, and more!!! I wish that we could have this more often! Well the people were courageous this year to go up on stage in front of many and show their "art", their "passion", their "soul". I am really grateful that I participated in Writer's Week this year and i have no regrets what so ever. And, just like last year, I came out of this inspired, refreshed, and emotionally "bloated" after the week was over. COME BACK WRITER'S WEEK!!! I feel like I might die without you!!!

Writer's Week

Monday: Julie Halpern was my favorite presenter that wasn't apart of the student or faculty periods. She told her story about her mental hospital experience with courage, and she didn't shy away from her tough life. I felt like I was able to relate to her better then most other writers because she told her story about how she lied to people, and broke rules. This behavior definately seems like something a kid would do so it kept me very interested. Also, she talked about a journal which is what a lot of kids have and those kids can also relate to her very well. She was a great way to start Writer's Week, and she definately did not disappoint me for the opening presentation.

Tuesday: Students are always very exciting to watch, but I didn't care much for most of Tuesday's presenters though. I thought a lot of the stories made me bored, and it was hard for me to concentrate. However, Unser was great. He was my favorite presenter out of anyone at Writer's Week. He was hilarious, and his comic skit kept everyone in the auditorium laughing. His joke about "Penas" was awesome because he pushed the rules of the school to the limit without actually doing anything wrong. Overall, Tuesday was boring except for Unser's presentation.

Wednesday: I've seen Sierra Demulder before and I thought she would do the same thing over again, but I was wrong. She mixed up everything, and she had new poems that were just as interesting. She was young and down to earth, and her poems had great descriptions and themes behind them. I liked how she read the poems that the audience wanted. For example, someone in the audience wanted to hear the poem about a garden, and although she didn't know it very well, she tried her best to do it. She was very student friendly and she was a good presenter for Writer's Week.

Thursday: I liked Thursday a lot because it was different. The musical day for the students was something I had never expected and it was very interesting to watch. Hannah Fox stuck out to me and caught my eye. She had a very unique voice and her comic skit was entertaining. I thought the raps were alright, but didn't make much sense at some points but they were usuall pretty funny and made me laugh. I thought the guitarist had a good voice and the piano player did a good job with her song also. Her song sounded like it could have been written by a well known, modern day artist. Thursday was definately a good day.

Friday: Friday was my least favorite day of Writer's Week. I thought Billy Lombardo was flat, and didn't seem to confident with his writing. I was expecting a great ending to a good week, but I just didn't get it. Some of Billy's jokes were funny, but overall he was very boring. I find it hard for myself not to slowly drift off into nothing, and I had to tell myself not to fall asleep. Even though the overall week was magnificent, Billy Lombardo was my least favorite presenter of the week.

Overall: All in all, Writer's Week is a great week. It's a week to just relax and listen to great writers share their best writings. In addition, I learned a lot through the week. The biggest thing I learned from the presenters was to not be afriad. I'm always afriad to even share my sharable draft, but after watching some of these people, I dont think im as afraid anymore. I realized a lot of the people up there were very shy, but they still had good writing. I usually don't like sharing writing, but now I feel i can. I feel like my writing can inspire some people like Unser and Hannah inspired me. After a great week of writers sharing their stuff, I now feel more confident with my own writing.

Writer's Week XVII

Monday: I wasn't at school on Monday so i can't really reflect on anything that was said, but as a substitute i can talk about someone i saw another day I guess? On Friday I saw Daphne Willis and she was amazing! All of her songs are so well written and catchy and she's become so successful yet she's so down to earth. I felt like she worked hard to get to the point she is at in her music and it is something she takes pride in.

Tuesday: Tuesday was all student writers. I really liked Tamar's piece about how she lost her best friend over a guy. I found it really easy to relate to. I also liked Nakendra's poems and wrote down one of her lines: " I'm too old to cry but she was too young to die." I LOVE THAT LINE! I felt like it stuck out and kind of summed up everything she was feeling. Also Unser was funny (as usual).

Wednesday: Sierra DeMulder! I'm not going to lie, when she first started I thought she was going to be really bad because something about her voice seemed fake and it annoyed me. But, as she spoke i got so lost in what she was saying that it didn't even matter. When she was talking about getting over a guy she said, "My body is a dead language and you pronounce every word perfectly." I wish i could think of lines like that...

Thursday: Music day! I thought everyone did really well. I think it was easy to tell who the better writers were and who were the better musicians, but when you have someone who is a good musician and a good writer it's magical.

Friday: Billy Lombardo! On the piece of paper i was taking notes on, the first thing i wrote down was "not a very good speaker." It seemed like when he started reading he read with no emotions but as he read on i realized that that's how in his mind the book should be read. He did put emotion into it but he saved it for the parts that needed it and overall he was a very good speaker. It's weird to think that every author has a way that they want their piece of writing to be read, yet the chances of us reading it 100% their way are slim to none.

Overall: I think if I had to "reflect" on writer's week i would say that i learned a lot. Writers like Sierra DeMulder show how writing can be more than just what's on paper. Her pieces aren't made to be read they're meant to be performed. I think in some way or another all pieces of writing are meant to be performed. For example, if you write a song obviously it's meant to be sung, but if you write a book it's soley meant to be read. No one is physically in front of you "performing" the book but think about what's going on in your head. The characters are there right? In your imagination? A writer's job is to perform for you, whether it be by inspiring your imagination or actually getting up in front of you. I guess i never really thought about that. Haha, gotta' love Writer's Week!
- Diana Huberty

Writer's Week

Julie Halpern: I thought Julie Halpern's story was very interesting. I find it so inspiring how she overcame her difficult childhood of being in a mental hospital to eventually becoming a fantastic author! I really like how she incorporates her life into her stories because that is such a fun and interesting way to tell them. It seemed that Julie found it relaxing to write when she was in troubling times. That is such an admirable quality to have because through writing, a person can express themselves in ways that cannot be told.
Tuesday Students: I thought the students overall on Tuesday were very good! It is really nice to see kids in high school writing such heartfelt stories and poems from their own personal experiences. I could also kind of relate to some of them, which made listening all the more better. I found it pretty neat to hear some of peoples' thoughts on some events that have happened to them because I may hear these events in a different way than they do and it is nice to hear the opposing side.
Sierra DeMulder: I though Sierra DeMulder was an awesome presenter! Even though some of her poems were gruesome, they were different than the poems I normally hear, so that made listening to her interesting. I find it amazing how she can be a totally normal person one minute and the next she was a narrator or character in a poem. I feel the positive energy she brought to the whole auditorium made some people feel comfortable and able to listen to her. It was really awesome to see how she connected with some of the listeners because I believe that that is a very important quality to have when speaking to a large group of people.
Thursday Students: I thought the "music day" on Thursday was overall pretty good. I liked the messages of some of the songs and found it amazing how talented the musicians were. I find it awesome how people can express their feelings through songs because I know I would have trouble doing that and it is amazing that they can! I do have to agree with some of my classmates, however, that the "music day" made me less interested than some of the other days. However, we saw some really good musicians!
Billy Lombardo: I thought Billy Lombardo was interesting, but I often times lost focus when I was listening. I wish he would have talked more about what he did to become an author instead of reading a lot of his own writing. However, I found some of his stories to be really interesting and touching. I feel like he did not grab the students' attention quite as well as some of the other writers, but I think some people really did enjoy listening to him. I agree with Lizzy that I like how he talked about his son because it shows that he is a very caring father.
I got so much out of Writer's Week this year! I really liked how we got the chance to see so many performances that we do not usually get to see. The one main idea that I got out of Writer's Week this year is that someone should not be afraid to go up on that stage and either read, sing, or perform to a large group of people because maybe someone in that audience has a similar story.

Writers Week

Monday- I really liked Julie Halpern. She was upbeat, yet still seemed pretty down to earth. Her stories were really cool. It was pretty sweet that she lied to the police and the FBI. Her time in the mental hospital was also something I did not expect to hear. I don't really picture mental patients as popular published authors. It just seemed really cool how she never really was that determined to become a writer, but she wound up as one.

Tuesday- For me this was a pretty average student period. I liked some presenters, and others I didn't like. Unlike most others I really wasn't a huge fan of Jonathan. It was pretty interesting, but I feel like he kind of stretched the story out a little longer than he should have. And I didn't really think there should be a moral coming from riding on an airplane. However, I loved Unser's skit. It was really funny, and I don't think he crossed any lines at all. He was undoubtedly my favorite presenter of the period.

Wednesday- I thought Sierra DeMulder was a fantastic presenter. She was both funny and serious, and some of her poems were very powerful. She talked about some serious stuff, like gay rights and serial killers. But she didn't do it in an inappropriate way. I also liked how she changed the point of view on certain issues, like the poem from the mother of Dahmor. I also just enjoy slam poetry in general. I like how they actually say them with a lot of power and passion, instead of just reading them. That made Wednesday more interesting for me.

Thursday- I enjoyed the musical day. I thought the first few presenters did nice but not great jobs. they just didn't really stand out to me. I actually kinda liked the raps by Davy and Dan. They had good ideas, but there were some issues with the technology that detracted from their performances. And Hannah was just flat-out awesome. I liked her raspy, sort of bluesy voice. And her comedy skit at the end was really funny. The whole crowd loved her, and so did I.

Friday- Billy Lombardo was not my favorite presenter. His writing seemed fine, but he mostly just read from his works. He didn't really talk or present much else. He actually did get more interesting though because he started making odd little remarks and things like that.

The biggest thing I took away from Writers Week is that anyone can be a writer. Billy Lombardo and Julie Halpern both showed that very well. I also liked seeing twelve students get up and present. It's nice seeing what your peers can do, and it shows you can become a writer, even without ever striving to be one.

Writer's Week

Monday-Boy was I excited for Writer's Week. When monday came, however, I was kind of disappointed. Julie Halpern presented but not well. I thought her story was just wierd. Sure it was very interesting but I, even if it may be true, do not believe all of her story entirely. A 6'6" satanist that roamed around and would randomly pray to the dark lord? Sure it's funny and interesting, but not very believable. She was down to earth when she spoke though. You could tell she was very comfortable with five hundred teenagers staring at her. She "understands us." Overall though, I did not enjoy her very much.

Tuesday-This was a much better day than monday. Seeing students perform, while I'd rather see proffessionals, was very nice. Of course, the highlight was Unser's "PENAS." No one could go the rest of the day without hearing people scream "PENAS in the hallways. I also liked the bird-lady story as well. I really don't know why, but it was enjoyable. Tuesday was good overall and it got me enjoying Writer's Week again.

Wednesday-Sierra was one of the best this year. She was so enjoyable and fun to watch the entire time. She knew when to be serious as well. Her poems were amazing too. The way she presented them was awesome in itself. The emotions she put in with the poems gave them life and I loved them. She is obviously a very down-to-earth person and would probably be really fun to hang out with. She used this when playing with the audience too. I don't know if there was a girl that actually requested "Garden," but just seeing her call out for that girl made things fun. This day was probably the best out of the week.

Thursday-This day was awesome. I know people aren't really supposed to do music, but this was one of the best days. Writing is cool, but adding music to it gives it an entirely new meaning. Hannah Fox was the best this year too. Her voice had that cool soulful sound and she did this to a nice guitar sound that gives her her own sound. An encore was appropriate too. I do feel bad for Maggie Dever when she went up after everyone was cheering for Hannah to perform again. In all this day was extremely good and I can't wait for the music day next year.

Friday-This day was bad only because it was the end of writer's week. Billy Lombardo performed and I'm sure everyone else will agree, this guy seemed super boring. After a few readings, though, I really started to listen and hear his story. It got really good when he began to speak of his childhood. He grew up in the ghetto and poor and he now is very happy and pretty well off I assume. He knew how to speak to us teenagers as well. He defended himself agianst fake laughs and could talk to us on a personal level very easily.

Overall-Writer's Week was a huge success this year. the proffessionals were great as always, but the students' talent really stood out this year. The music day was especially good and fun to watch. The people in charge could do a better job with the technical stuff, however. At times there were brakes because of microphones in the wrong place of the microphones not working at all. Other than that, this year was a big success. Writer's Week is one of the things I love most about Fremd and I cannot wait until next year. It'll be tough to beat this years show though.